Monday, 2 June 2014
My worst experience by Takumi O.
I will tell you about the worst experience of my life. It happened on October
6, 2010 when I was a first-year student in high school. My school held a
marathon race and we had to run for 20 kilometers. I had to run hard because I
was a member of the soccer club, and my coach is a physical education teacher and
he told us that we had to do our best. It meant we had to run hard. I didn’t like
the marathon because it was painful for me and it took a lot of time. In
addition, one month before the marathon, we practiced a marathon in physical
education class. It was a hot day. I slept well the day before, and I tried to
do my best. First, I ran with my friends who were in a same club, but it was
very hard and I told my friends that it was too hard for me to keep up with
them and they left me. Then I started run alone. I ran and ran and ran. When I had
run for 10 kilometers, I felt cold. I was puzzled because the day was very hot
and I was running, so I had to feel hot. I was very tired, so I concentrated my
running. Then I ran and ran again. When I awoke, I was in a hospital. A doctor
told me that I had heatstroke and lost consciousness at the 17 kilometer point.
I felt sick, and I was tied up because I began to act violently when I was
carried into the hospital. I had to stay in hospital for three days, and avoid
playing sports for two weeks. This was the worst experience of my life, and a marathon
became my weak point from then.
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Hi, Takumi. I'm Ayumi.
ReplyDeleteYour essay is very interesting and easy to undestand.
It is surprising that your highschool students have to run 20km!
Thank you Ayumi! I was glad that you read my essay. I think to run 20km is not so long because my friends who go to other school run 50km!
DeleteHi,Takumi!
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a real bad experience worth to tell everybody.
Your draught is really funny!